Lonely or alone
Connected and close
Disconnected
Distanced from
What you know
Is reality
An illusion
Get you to
Look away from
What’s going on
Should’ve known
The signs were there
Did you read them
Listen to anyone
Wanted your dreams
To come true
Held out hope
But it broke you
Never made a move
Will you wait
Until you die
To make up
Your mind
Herminia Chow 
you have such great lines!!!
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Aw, thank you. 🙂
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The lines are short, crisp and meaningful, Herminia.
Beneath the words is an entire narrative going on.
Much love
john
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I appreciate the feedback. Thanks for taking the time, John.
Take care.
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great last four lines! And a wonderful inner conversation from the frustrated onlooker?
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Thanking you. Yes!
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This is deep. Well done!
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It took a ton of edits to get there. Thanks.
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This may rank as one of your best.
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Thanks so much!
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